
Why they spend just 30 seconds reading it
The admissions team has hundreds of letters to get through. If your first two sentences fall flat, yours ends up in the bin.
A specific story: «At 14 I read a book on neuroscience, and I've dreamed of researching memory ever since» beats «I have always been interested in science».
A link to the programme: name a specific course or professor. «I was drawn to your course on quantum physics led by Professor Smith» shows you've actually read the university's website.
Honesty: don't claim you «saved the world». Try «I came last in an academic olympiad, and here's what I learned».
Clichés («I'm highly motivated», «it's my dream»)
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